My Bahisht… (meri tasauwuraati jannat)

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My Bahisht my paradise …… (Intro of author )

Sometimes loneliness makes great changes in personality as well as in life of one …….

Sometimes It just scattered your life like dry leaves in autumn and sometimes it make us adjust so well that person become something he/she never though of…..

I think loneliness is nothing but a hot steel cup in which human life act as a soft wax and it mould the way person thinks…….

Some words , millions, or billions changed the way we think……

change the way we interpret, anticipate and imagine the life…..

this is what I think about my all FF’s and OS and Poems….

It is nothing but the way I interpret the life and its ways …………

to be honest never thought, I will be able to manage my studies with my job and writing too but yes I did it…

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KEEP SAKES OF LOVE (COMING SOON)
Where love was divine, serene and beautiful, something brutally killed all the relations of MAANEET does the keepsakes of love survive their love or it will die its destined death ???
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her Dreams BEYOND IMAGINATION
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where love is animosity, its a game of emotions which will drown u till death

 

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a story of girl who want her life partner only to be hers …
and what she gt in is HARDCORE betrayal but FROM WHOM???

 

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My lover my enemy- part 13

 ~My lover my enemy~
part 13

Both Rahul and geet were not in their senses, Dadi had pulled geet inside the house and closed all the doors, That was actually end of her own self control, she just hugged dadi and cried bitterly like a five years old girl, a five year old girl who was scared of being in fever,  a small gal who wanted to to hug her mother, telling her all insecurity she slpet, she slept aftr a long time , a long time since her mother left her, but her sleep was nt peaceful, something was bothering her in dat sleep also she clutched dadi’s hand in her tight hold , not leaving her at all that finally Dadi slept beside , promising herself that they wont left this small baby, who always acts like a mature, but from inside she is same innocent kid who gt scared of her own deeds.

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Maan was sitting near the bar area, One in…

Second In…

Third …

fourth…

after an hour she gulped the Nth drink and slammed the glass on the bar…

So she is her sister, she is his daughter…

Well geet handa, You are relatively related with sameera and Mohinder for this u have to pay…

You have to pay damn it…

He was blind in his own revenge… He forgt about rano … he forgt about every damn beautiful family moments which spent with Rano and her…

With unstable steps he moved towards the room, smilng evilly on his own plan..

Thinking this is the perfect revenge he could take from handa’s …

~~~~~~~~~~~Handa Mansion~~~~~~~~

Mohinder was pacing restlessly in the hall where as samina (Mohinder’s mother) was sitting on the sofa fuming in anger, how could you Mohi…  kyaa aap jaantey hai uss ladki kaa uss ghar me hona aapko kitnaa nuksaan (loss) pohunchaa sakta hai…

Sameera toh waise bhi maan ke picche deewani ho gayi hai, who humaare kisi bhi kaam ki nahi rahi, yeh geet..

Yeh geet un khurana’s ke ghar me reh rahi hai agar wo bhi unhi ki tarah ho gayio to aap ko pata honaa chahiye yeh kitni badi problem ho sakti hai humaarey liyeh…

Aap bilkul bhi fikar mat kariye mata ji me usse wapas lekar aaou…

His words caught in throat when his mother shot a glare… she took the PAAN inside her mouth and started thinking…

Aap ne jo kuchh bhi kiyaa uss din waha who nahi karna chahiye thaa…

Rano ka kyaa thaa ab tak apna munh band karke padi hui thi yaha waha aagey bhi aise hi rehtii aur kuch nahi toh kahi mar mara jaati kam se kam hum par toh usski maut ka Ilzaam nai aata…

Ab geet tumhein lagtaa hai kabhi tumhaari suneghi… Nahi…woh kabhi tumhaari shakal bhi nahi dekhna chaheghi… …

It was point of worry for Handa’s as sameera’s insane state and geet being against them could create a fuss in media and the leakage of news geet being handa’s daughter would devastated their political estability…

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It was more than a month after Rano, geet was behaving normally but something had died inside her, she was same like before but still something was missing in life…  

She was working in the kitchen making some soup for Dadi, when somebody came from behind and the unstable breathing over her neck horrified her… she was scared to turn as the closenesss was too much to bear, might be some inches or mili inches… he snaked his manly possessive hands around her flat stomach grabbing her and closing the fatal distance between them… his whole body was hugging her like another skin, he snaked his hands upwards … his heart was beating restlessly breaking its own speed, her heavy breathing was mirror of the effect he had on her…

Maan.… she moaned when he touched her feminine asset over the fabric… his hands were roaming on its own pace… sometimes squeezing yet sometimes soft and again the roughness and harshness screaming his possession over her…  she was going jelly on her leg…

He lifted her and moved towards his room.. kissing her over the neck her eyes were closed… she was damn engrossed in him to react, as if she was drugged by him… Drugged by his essence… drugged by his presence… he lied her down and sat beside her …

Looking deeply in her face … something he feared most was on the way… what he planned months before while implementing it why he was scared…

The game was simple to use the Geet like he being used by that sl*t sam…

He wanted them to feel the same pain…

But with the mere thought to ditch this gal was shivering him.. was making this Maan scared,  

Its been fortnight…That was beautiful day for geet and fortunate that her love came towards her smiling beautifully and the evening was most cherishable when Maan confessed his love for geet…

Yes The GEET HANDA now she don’t want any one neither her friends nor her so called family…

She have her maan beside her…

His love was something gave her strength to live in this atrocious globe yet sometimes the intense gaze and mysterious smile of his, left her confuse but yet another moment the passionate  maan just succeed in washing away her all insecurities…

He came near her face, just mili inches away, he put his manly hands on her soft cheeks, she was long lost, he fixed her lips on hers…

He fixed it and started kissing… geet felt butterfly in her stomach… some strange sensation which started from her heart crossed her stomach making way downwards …

Ummm … she moaned…

Her moan was enough to drive him crazy, he was going insane, he grabbed her waist and his hands started roaming on her body above the fabric, he was feeling her, he lied down beside her and bite her lips to get the entrance in the galaxy of new world of passion, in new world of zeal, in new world of attraction …

He was going insane with her each moan and reaction if it would be in his hands and his morales allowed it, he would took her then and there…

For the first time geet feeling something really strange in his touch…

Though they already made love to each others Nth times, he was always passionate and loving but today it was something really strange …

She was in love with him, and with his single gaze she could understand something is bothering him…with passion today she felt some kind of madness, some types of aggression…

She wanted her Maan to open up infront of her… yes she agree he is very shy, her cant openly show his love neither to his father, nor Daadi…

His hands touched the zip of her kurti and pulled downwards…the feeling of her soft back was driving insane , it was warm and she was breathing heavily her lips shiverd as he left them and shifted his attention on nape, the hot kisses direct on her nape was sending goose bumps and chill down her spine…soon his lips replaces with teeth  …

He bite harshly , she winced in pain and opened her eyes… the pain was reflecting in her eyes with passion and desire, he licked the area to sooth the pain…and looked into her eyes…

Her eyes…

It was innocent,

It was nave…

It was like some prayer which fulfilled of his by the almighty…

She was as innocent as angel…

Already so much in pain, she faced only betrayel, only sorrows, and only hatred…

How damn it, how …

How he would be able to see the same pain and same darkness on her face from which he kept out her…how he would be able to see the pain in her angelic eyes…

How the hell he would be able to betray his own love, his own life, his own existance

But yes he need to do it…

He must have done this…

He must have done this the moment they enter in his life…

But maan whats her mistake…

Why she would repay for the deed of one whom she never even met…

She, she is a blood of handa’s she need to repay for their karma’s…

Maan…

She opened her eyes when she found nothing but the sheer emptiness, she was shcked utterly last second he was kissing her madly and now he was nowehere to be found…

She arranged her dress and left with heavy heart and dizzy mind about his undefined behavior…

nakul came and informed about the arrival of Mohinder shiver ran down her spine… she was scared why he was here, least she knew it was another round of game fate decided for her…

Precape: Mohinder. geet , maan Angry

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My lover my enemy – part 12

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I am sorry we can’t save her…

That’s the only thing was ringing in her mind…

Ek khushi maangi thi, Baap pyaar, bhagwaanji itni badi saza mujh se meri jannat chhen li, mere zindaghi ki ikloti muskaan, ussey mujh se q chheena,

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Life is never easy for those who meant it , it is neither so easy to achieve nor so cheap to buy, we need to earn it, earn it with hard work, earn it with so much pain, earn it with sacrifies of happiness, earn it with compromise with situation, than only the real taste of life can be feel by the person who mean to live it, So that for Maaneet, Both were sitting lifelessly, life, what is life, a feeling that u alive, a heart fill with desire happiness and small small expectation or just the breathing , inflow of the oxyegne and outflow of carbondie oxyed, both were Numbed…

Geet’s Monologue:

I Opened my eyes 20 years ago, and seen my only mother, struggling with the life , struggling for her dignity in her own house, in the house where she lived her 20 years since she born, still she was struggling around her own brothers…

Brothers, yes they were her Brother, her own blood, though the relation, the love of that blood was died didn’t know when, she was living life like a maid in the same house where she was treated as a princess before…

I was 5 years old, I so much wanted to sleep hugging my mother I was in fever , shivering with a climate, feeling scared , what if I would died in this room, Nobody will come and save me , Mumma is  not around me. I pulled comforter, sorry Not comforter that was a bed sheet which I used as a comforter, I was Inside that, feeling helpless, well How a 5 year old girl would feel, when her mother won’t around her and she would sure that she gonna die soon…

I felt something was falling on that cover which enveloped me, and I realized Its None other than angels of death, They came to snatch away my soul, and I closed my eyes very tightly, I dnt wanted to open my eyes and see Those devil angels…

Aftr a long period of time I opened My eyes and seen, Rahul standing beside me with teary eyes and cloth in his hand, Jhalli Geet tu ne mujhe dara diya, he was also at same age as mine , I was damn scared, I looked around and again a feeling to burst out in tears increased its intensity in me, tu faint ho gayi thi,

Nahi mujhe who death’s devil angels lene aaye they…

I felt something was falling on my leg, I told her with teary eyes, I didn’t wanted to cry in front of her, I never wanted to cry infront of anyone, I wanted people to know me as a strong person. Strong like a rock and indeed they now call me stone hearted person, But they didn’t knew It took me to kill my own self, My own innocent self to become like this,

Arey  nahi geet see, It was ceilieng’s plaster wich was falling on your legs slowly and as you were already were in high fever you thought its devil angel, He did put wet cloth on my forhead, I wanted to push him hard, I wanted to scream and ask for my own mother, I wanted to throw him out of my room, but I was so much weak, I was weak that time, and yes I am weak again this time…

Mumma wasn’t available for me two whole days she was busy in taking care of Natasha as she was also suffering from virla fever…

I n nights I wanted to hug my muma whenever I felt scared but she was never available for me,whenever I topped In the school, after coming back to home I used to spend hours in checking her facial expression, was she happy with my progress, was she wanted me to progress like this, But My Best marks were nothing compare to natasha’s average marks, then I was thirteen I realized Its not my own home, Its “MY UNCLE’S” house where Im staying, apna ghar who hota hai Jaha aapke papa rehtey ho, This was the only line echoing in the wall of my ears, lines were told by Natasha  only, natsha was my uncles sister, though she was nt only kid of my uncles yet she was princess of her father, she was apple eye of whole family, the way all pampered herm It used to burned something inside me badly, afterwards I realized it was not something, it was my heart which totally turned into ashes…

Then after 40 years of struggle of my own mother’s life, she finally decided to stand up for herself, o stand for her OWN daughter, I finally gt what I always prayed, I gt my mother back, I gt what I possessd.

How silly it is naa I was fighting for the one who was mine…

But still somewhere in my heart, the craving of fathers love always lingered, It was my part of my heart which I wanted to hide from my own self…It was place in my heart  which I wanted to dissolve in my so called happiness after meeting Raajveer uncle I thought if myfather would ever with me he would definitely be like him, I seen respect as well as care for my in his eyes, the way he used to put his hand on my head with fatherly toch I used to felt that yes, This is the only heaven wich is lingering here in this cruel world, with Dadi I used to think yes , My dadi would definitely treat my like this only, she used to spend hours with me telling me her love story with Ranjit dada ji maan’s grandfather, Or sometime love story of maanyata maa and Rajveer uncle, why they named maan as Maan , The moment when Maan’s mother died she was holding little maan in her hand , and told rajveer to name him something which always remind him of hers…

The biggest fool I was, I thought life finally gave me what I deserve, a life full of happiness, a life full of love, a life full of beautiful memories, and life and destiny mercilessly again took U turn and snatch away all my dreams, all my small happiness, I begged to god for my father, and yes he gave me , he gave me my father back but with a regret that why did I asked for this, the pain of not having something is  very much bearable compare to the regression that why do u have this …

I wish I could change my wish of being together with my father, I wish I could change my destiny and bring back my mother…

Alas ,I wish , I could these are the only two things which I can chant now as I cant do much than this…

End of monologue

She was sitiing aloof with the surrounding, the mental pressure and trauma was something more than her power to accept, her mind became totally numb, with the whole surrounding, she even didn’t realized who came and brought her home, The only time when she felt sharp pain in her heart was when they asked her to visit her mother for the last time, and all those longing of whole her life came again and stand infront of him, smilling evilly on her asking her to face them, showing their evil and dirty eyes , smirking on her and saying Yes we are , we are the only thing which filled ur destiny, Longings, cravings, and emptiness, we never leave you alone, Seems person never live alone, even In alone area, loneliness came together with them, some find loneliness in the crowded area and some find peace in the lonesum area,

She also became same, she used to sit in her room for hours and hours cried bitterly on her empty fate, she used to stare the stars with the feel of emptiness without blinking any gaze, as if her body was here but soul departed in some different universe…

For Maan  it was more than shocking news, he was again in the darkness of his past, Saameera and Geets relation and suddenly the involvement of Rano maa with his father left him all confused, but being a strong minded man, he overcame with a though of revenge…

It was just another day  when dadi forced geet to came out of her cage and they both were sitting in the balcony, geet seen towards the door, and her face become all pale, because of anger or because of pain , that was bit doubtfull actually which emotion was overpowering on her that was unpredictable, till the time dadi could ask geet to go inside that man came near her and grabbed geet from her arm harshly and made her stand,

What You did geet, what the freaking hell  u done to my buaa…

Geet’s body stiffened a bit but again she expertly hided all her emotions and expression in that cold mask of hers.

Me ne kucch nahi kiyaa tum logho ne unhe maar daala, Meri maa ko maar dala rahul, Tum logho ne maar dalai. Who khush rehne laghi thi naa tum sab se sehan kaise hota, who zindaghi jeeney laghi thi naa tum sab kaise bardaasht kar lete, she finally broke down, all those painfull thoughts which were freezing her mind since long exploded and flowed via her pearly tears…

She grabbed Raahul’s collar and pushed her out of the gate, as well as crying bitterly and saying what happened in the crucial evening which just scatted her world in the small pieces.

Rahul was also frustrated, he actually raised his voice on her for the very first time, It was Maan who came in between and separated them, Rahul was very much angry because even geet neither informed them about their own relation’s demise nor they performed any of her last rituals..

Both Rahul and geet were not in their senses, Dadi had pulled geet inside the house and closed all the doors, That was actually end of her own self control, she just hugged dadi and cried bitterly like a five years old girl, a five year old girl who was scared of being in fever,  a small gal who wanted to to hug her mother, telling her all insecurity she slpet, she slept aftr a long time , a long time since her mother left her, but her sleep was nt peaceful, something was bothering her in dat sleep also she clutched dadi’s hand in her tight hold , not leaving her at all that finally Dadi slept beside , promising herself that they wont left this small baby, who always acts like a mature, but from inside she is same innocent kid who gt scared of her own deeds.

Precape: Revenge Of Maan started 

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My Lover My Enemy- part-11

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Papa…

Is she his daughter…

Ohh My God.. Is she sister of Sameera…

Is she…

Is sheee

How it could be possible…

How it would happen…

Both were shocked, but things were different for both, For geet it happened and for Maan how it could happened…  

She went and hugged him tightly, he was talking with some of his delegates, though he was not at all interested in coming to the wedding, but it was sameera, because of whome he came, sameera and geet were step sisters, Geet were unaware of the fact, she was the one who always thought that her father is the one who love her dearly and It is because of some clashes between her parents because of whome she was partied from her fathers love, least she knew that her mother, being blind in the love of motherhood, wanted to save her from each and every cruel reality of her life,

She was totally engrossed in her new find paternal love when somebody pushed her so hard, be away, you daughter of a bitch, he roared…

Maan was standing behind, he was still in the shock, everything, everydamn thing which happened with him, was now running like a film, that insult, that pain, that anguish, that shame was still saved in his mind like it happened just a moment before, he was numb, his mind was not accepting anything…

How it could be…

Sameera and geet,

If rano maa is his wife than who is Natasha Handa, Sameera’s Mom, what the hell is going on…

Geet was still in that moment, when he pushed her she tought may be he didn’t recognize her, she went again and hugged him,

papa its me, Geet…

Aap ki beti,…

Chup ho jaa ladki, tu humaari Koi nahi, meri sirf ek hi beti hai, Sameera , Sameera Handa, Geet was in utter shock, her mouth went dry, she was taking steps back, when somebody supported her, she looked beside her mother, her supporting system, her savior, her guard, her guidance, her mentor, she was again with her, trying to engulf in her motherly warmed touch, how could she,

She was looking at her mother surprisingly,shocked, what he is saying he is not my father, how could he, since nursery I wrote my name, Geet Mohendar Handa, I am Handa, Daughter of handa family, gussa muma se hai mujhe se kaisi naraazghi,  

When her mother took her behind her and came ahead, Mr. Handa hum isskey baarey me baad me baat karenghey, abhi ke liyeh hume shaadi par dhyaan dena chahiye…

Kaisi shaadi aur kaha ki shaadi, meri zindaghi barbaad karke apne puraaney aashiq ke saath gulchharrrey uddatey hue sharam nahi aati, apni beti ki shaadi ki umar me apni shaadi rachatey phir rahi ho, tum auratzaad ke naam par kalank ho, he raised his hand to slap her hard, but seems somebody stopped it in mid air only, It was Maan’s father Rajveer, Mohindar tamasha mat banaao yaha par bachey bhi hai, hum ghar jaa kar bhi baat sakte hai,

Q, Q baat karu me ghar jaa kar, yeh besharmi ke kaam karein puri duniya ke saamney aur me ussey bolu bhi naa…

Mujhe toh iska chahra ussi din benakab kar dena chahiye tha jab yeh tere saath bhaag gayi thi, ussi din mujhe yeh thappad ussey maar dena chahiye tha, Ussi din usey usski do kodi ki aukaat yaad dila deni chahiyeh thi…

Arey chhod mujhe lagha ke itney saalo baad iska dimaagh thikaaney aa gaya hogha, gaya tha isskey ghar lene, Batay mujhe isski bhabhi ne isskey besharmi ki kahaniya, kis tarah yeh un ke muh par sharmindaghi ki kalak mal kar tumhaarey saath gulcharrey udaa rahi hai…

Me q nahi bolu sab ko, Me toh bataoungha take tum dono ko bhi pata chale sharmindaghi kaisi laghti hai, kaisa laghta hai jab doob marney ka dil karta hai aur paani nahi milta, kaisa laghta hai jab tumhara man karta hai zameen phatey aur tum uss me samaajaao aur tumhey waha bhi jagah nahi milti, with that he took the  mike from the DJ corner and …

Suno ladies and gentlemen please may I have you attention please,

I have an announcement to make…

Meri patni, apne munh bole aashik ke saath bhaag gayi thi… aur me kucch bhi nahi kar paaya, na me kal kucch kar paya tha aur na me aaj kucch kar paya Bolo Rano handa, sabke saamney badi saavitri bani phirti hai aur apne munh boley aashik ke saath bhaag gayi, Rano was literally feeling that earth should tear and she just slip inside it, he came ahead and folded her both hands infront of him, Mohindar bas karo, kitna bologhey Geet aapki both izzat karti hai, wo yeh bardaasht nahi kar paayeghi, wo…

Her words caught in the mid only when mohindar grabbed her hair and throw her on the floor,

Naa who meri beti hai aur naa me usska baap, yeh isi Insaan ka ganda khoon hai, jiskey saath tum bhaagi thi…

All were looking at rano sympathetically, nobody, not even a  single soul came ahead, Geet stiffened for the moment and the next fraction she ran towards her mother,

Maa… Uttho muma, please I M sorry me kabhi nahi bolunghi please utho, her face was drenched in her own blood, something really sharp hit on her head,

Geet Rajveer bhaai sahib ke saath rehna, Mohinder se tumhaari jaan…

She fainted Maa… Maaa…bolo me sun rahi hu, Maa..

Maan dekho na kyaa… Maaannn…

Maan came out from the trance, he wtinesssed everything, he was in shock, how much a person can be cruel, how much a person can be pitiless that other need to pity on him… 

Maan rushed towards her, Yudi gaadi nikaaalo fast… she needs immediate treatment, both rushed towards the car when Geet grabbed his coloar, maan me bhi chalunghi,

Geet bete aap ruko mere sath,

Nahi mujhe maa ke saath jana hai… maaa

She really became small innocent child, who just wanted to save her mothers, who just fearing of her precious lose, who just wanted to wipe her all tear and looked at her mother and she will smile and said I am fine Beta…

Maan nodded and asked her to follow him, They headed towards the hospital, Because of their influence they gt fast and best treatement…

They took her inside the operation theater, she was sinking at that time only…

Operation started its been a three hours when doctor came out with dipped head, and his gesture just shook the Maan inside and out,

Nooo

Nahiii aisa nahi ho saktaa

Rano maa will be fine nothing can be happen to her, She is very nice, every moment wich he lived with her was flashing in his mind, every time she cared for him like his own mother, Every time she asked to have a meal properly, every time she came in his room in the night to had a check whther he is sleeping properly or not, Everytime when he slept or pretend to sleep she brushed her hand in his hair and kissed hishead, as if there was something more relation with him, a deep one relation, every time he bossed around him to have a proper rest all the moment was coming out of his eyes infornt of eyes, he never cried, not even when she left him, not even his own father disown him, not even when his dadi was bedridden in hospital because of him, when nobody was talking with he didn’t cried, when every one blaming him, accusing him, he didn’t cried, but why the hell he is crying Now, Damn he shouldn’t the tear shouldn’t come out from the eyes from the man like Maan singh khurana…

Dr. Came infront of Maan and simply nodded…

Sorry we cant save her…

And geet thumped on the floor, tear dried in instant, her throat went dry and oxyegen stoped generating more breath in her, she was numbed…

I am sorry we cant save her…

That’s the only thing was ringing in her mind…

Ek khushi maangi thi, Baap pyaar, bhagwaanji itni badi saza mujh se meri jannat chhen li, mere zindaghi ki ikloti muskaan, ussey mujh se q chheena,


Precape: She is Not geet Handa, Mr. Mohinder Handa, she is Geet Khurana, Geet Maan singh khurana, he said with a cruel smirk on his face, well game starts now, revenge should be completed anyhow Smile

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Geet was standing with the worry all over written on her face, she rushed towards him.

What happened…

Yudi…

Raani’s baba gt heart attack last nigh, and as per his last wish, Rani and Yudi both get married, but now uncle creating problem and not at all accepting their marriage,

he said with ruffling his hair, her temple was full of wrinkle, Don’t know from when she started worrying for her, she wall trying not to react on his matters, on his acts, but she was helpless, helpless hopelessly, his all worries didn’t know since when became all hers.

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Rano was sitting near the Dadi talking with her, She proud of her Daughter today, yes she always Did, Does and Will do in future too, her daughter is really strong, really brave.. and kindhearted mature, everything, each and every quality which make a person unique her daughter possess it…

Flashback…

They both were talking when the door screeched with certain noise, and Rano saw Dadi was standing there with some unfamiliar expression…

The way she came near the geet and rested her hand on hers, Geet was first shocked to react then realty realized her that it was something of her dream which comes true, that too really soon, Guess the one moment, one fraction of second is enough to change person;s mind and a single word of the person is enough to change others heart..

But her happiness was short lived, Dadi fainted because of mental stressed, her BP fell down…

But this time when geet went towards her it was not just a job for her, It was like she trying to save her one more dyeing relation, and so that she succeed, she saved her, she saved and made one more person fall for her…

Flashback Ends…

Geet asked Maan’s father to let Yudi and Raani stay in their home, Raani was quite impress, with Geet and they both became good Frnd…

Its been a month, Finally Yudhishtir’s Father accept their marriage, though he was really stubborn about Rani being their Badi bahu but slowly gradually with her nature and Behavior he gt satisfied and happily accepted her too…

Where as Geet was all with Dadi and her mother their relation getting better day by day

Now Dadi was very much happily dependent on geet…

And they both MAAN and GEET

Uff she used to steal glances of maan, whenever he was busy in anything, she never talked randomly, the main topic of their talk was always Dadi, what she is eating, how is her health, how is she doing, Maan was more than happy with her recovery and now he not at all hesitate to give crdit of it…

Their relation was getting better day by day…

But something strange was still there that geet notice, maan never talked or sit happily with his father, there was always coldness in their relation , what was the mystery behind it, she was still unaware of it..

Least she know, she was also a part of that mystery and going to be an important aspect of that story, which was already written by destiny for them..

One whole week went in hush bush situation all were busy, Dadi, Geet , Rani and Rano all were totally engrossed in their reception preparation,

The day came it was evening time, when all were set and some of them already left for the venue,

Whole house was Geet and Maan left alone in the parking,

It was their Reception evening, Geet was wearing a red Sharara,

and Maan was in a black, (Man in black haayee) maan was standing stunned with the serene scene infront of him, The angle coming downstairs in the main hall, though he was standing in the parking area but the beauty was not at all hidden, it was visible through the Main large wall size window, He was mesmerized totally drown in her beauty, he was in trance but the dream came to an end, when she poked his arm,

Maan chaley …

Hmmm chalo…


Geet was somewhere feeling uncomfortable with his intense stare, whereas her heart was also pacing restlessly with his heated intense gaze.

Why she looked like her, Q isski aankhein mujhe uss dhokey ki yaad dillati hai..

Q naa chahtey hue bhi mujhe apni taraf khinchti hai, Q isski ek muskurahat par mar mitney ka ji karta hai, Q isski aankho ke aansu bardaasht nahi hotey, Q usski dil ki dhadkano par apna naam sunna chahta hoo…

Q aisa Q, Aaakhir Q…

With his each question he was accelerating the speed, he was really feeling suffocated with his own dilemma,

The same familiar feeling between Sameera and Geet, he was failed to relate it, he was feeling that they are related somewhere but where, the link of it was broken somewhere…

They reached on venue, But the life is not at all easy neither for maan nor for geet, the entrance scene was rooted them,

Her father, she could see her father…

He was standing there with some random peoples, He was talking with some peoples, and Maan was standing there fuming in anger, huhhh who invited him here, that bas***d, the person who never hesitated to use his own daughter for his business, who never hesitated to push others in darkness..

He was standing in front of him alive, laughing, he was happy and here he, his family was suffering because of him…

He clinchd his fist and tried to walk ahead when something he heard, which made him frozen on the spot…

What…

Goddd…

How it could be possible

No…

No ways…

It cant be …

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Papaa My father,

She was in trance…

Her longings for father, her craving of childhood, everything was dispersed with just his view only, he was laughing, she was satisfied yes she was satisfied with his happiness only..

Papa papa, the child inside the Geet handa, the cute innocent girl, which she made slept long time back was awake with the sight of released shelter only, 

She went ahead leaving numb Maan beside…

Papa…

Is she his daughter…

Ohh My God.. Is she sister of Sameera…

Is she…

Is sheee

How it could be possible…

How it would happen…

Precape: Sorry we cant save her  Cry

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Maan grabbed her from her arms and dragged out side the room when Dadi smirked and left the bed and move towards the window.

She saw them both of were standing there arguing, then she saw geet turned and moved towards her room with teary eyes, She smilled wickedly, seems maan fired her, seems she left her, left her forever ever…

Dadi was on cloud nine, she was taking a toll of the house, yelling on all the servents, when she was passing through geets room she heard she was crying…

Well bauhath din tak mujh par apna hokum chalaya geet, zara tumhaarey aansuon ki nami se apne jaltey dil ko thanda toh karlooo, she thought wickedly…

Geet jab itni hi takleef hai toh beta chhod do, she was crying, resting her head on her mothers lap, when her mother said, hum kucch naa kucch kar lenghey beta, zindaghi me pehley hi itney dukh dekhey hai ab tum ko aise takleef me nahi dekh sakti meri bacchi, she too sobbed, her daughter, liitle angle of her life, for whom she left her husband, her love, her life, she accepted to be servant in her own maternal home, she left her name, then still the fate gain played a dirty game with her, and she distanced with her own daughter, she was all trying her level best to make her brother, sister in laws, their child satisfied with her work that she almost forget that one more person was lingering, craving, dying for her love, her own daughter was left alone, in the race of life for whom she left everything, she was left alone by her…

But whatever she did in past, that was mistake, she realized it, now the sole aim of her life was to be, to beside her daughter, and she was playing a role of guardian, a mother, a care taker very well…

She saw her geet smiled with her very first time, she saw her daughter sharing her thoughts with her like a friend very first time so how could, how could she left her alone to face this cruel monsters again all alone

She caressing her hairs, giving her a piece of mind about that older lady and geet smiled in tears…

She sat straight again and smiled with moist eyes…

Maa aap bhi naa I cant leave her…

Dadi was all shocked again…

Huhhh she is behind my money, she wanted me to give her money, greedy nasty middle class people…

Maa you know I always felt, she is like mY own dadi, if she would still alive in this world, she would be like her only…

Bit khadoos with others and bit caring with her love ones…

Mujhe Maan ki baton ka bhi bura nahi lagha maa…

Agar unn ki jagah me bhi hoti then also I would reacted in the same way…

Maa mujhe aisa laghta hai iss ghar me jaise it is mine…

I was forbidden first, but now this house, this breeze accepted me as im theirs, then how could I leave her…

You know what I realized, daadi is not what she pretend, she is not what she show that she is…

From inside she is really kindhearted…

You know what Maan’s father the way he love me…

The way he care for me as I am his own daughter, it expressed how much this house was longing for a care taker…

I know dadi is scared, she don’t want to trust me but I will let her make trust on my self, I will win her heart one day definitely…

She said in firmed tone with determined expression, Least she know she already won her heart, dadi was standing there outside the door with tears in her eyes and guilt in her heart,

How sweet she is…

How innocent she is…

She all the way knew how I was trying to get her off, how much I was hating her all the way…

But she still… still want to win my heart, Dear daughter you already won it…

Maan left that day with an irritation, he knew he should not shout on her like that, her sad face was flashing in front of his eyes all the way of journey, yes in journey, he left again, ran away from the problem, from the fear, How could he,

But yeah still how could he, he was imagining someone in her, her eyes were same like hers, it haunted him badly… 

He wanted to get away from the vicinity of that eyes, he just hated the person to the core, he was on the way to shimla when he received the call about dadi being hospitalized again…

He just turned the car and drove towards the Mumbai madly…

He insanely rushed inside the hospital as he soon as he saw Doctor he grabbed her collar hows my Dadi, hows Savitri khurana Doctor…

He was shivering in fear and shaking the doctor terribly, seems like he was not in his self, well how could he, how could he be calmed when his dadi’s life was at stake…

His hold loosened when he heared, she is Fine Maan…

And here his mind sparked with the thoughts of her…

Yes she was there…

She was there that time inside the house all the while na than how could she in on bed…

He looked at her his piercing gaze was sending shivers through her spine…

She was literally feeling that earth take her inside her…she was horrified, somewhere sacred of maan’s anger and worried for Dadi too.

When maan grabbed her arm and dragged her outside the Passage…

I told you, I told u geet I wnt spare you till death if anything happen to my dadi…

Now you have to pay it, pay it back, what have you done to her…

He was shaking her in his tight hold, a tear welled down from her eyes and Maan ruthlessly wiped it with his rough touch, don’t you dare to distract me with your crocodile tears, I know how to manage a greedy gal like you,

You are also behind my money like she was, you are the same like her, selfish, bitch…

Geet looked at him with shocked expression the word was not all digested by her, she raised her hand on him, she slapped really hard that her hand was printed on his cheek, he was too shocked to react,

When Doctor came running who is Geet…

Geet came ahead hurriedly, Me ji doctor , Doctor I am Geet,

Savitri khurana calling your name, she wants to meet you now…

She rushed towards the ICU, she saw her lying , her eyes were closed, she came and stand there silently, she took her hand in her hand and kissed the palm,

Aap ne toh dara diya dadi, a tear fall on her palm, when Dadi opened her eyes and smiled weekly,

Geet bte kyaa aap humein Maaf kar paayeinghein, Hum ne aap…

Shhh Dadi, aap aaram kijiyeh aur aap apni beti se maafi maangh kar ussko sharminda karenghi, aise toh me kabhi apne aap se nazrein nahi milaa paoounghi

They both smiled and geet rested her head on her chest and hugged her dadi brushed her hand and kissed her, and Geet smiled,

She finally achieved what she wanted to be.. she won this battle of life too

Well to won someone’s heart is not less than a battle, not less than a war. 

Maan was standing motionless outside the room, watching the heavenly scene,

His dadi, who is not less than a mother for him, was finally coming back to the life, after that dreadful incident she didn’t wanted to trust on even the servants, she finally loving the others too, she was really became possessive for Maan, so that her health was totally getting drowned because of these worries…

His thoughts disturbed with the call, he saw It was Yudi on the another line…

Haa yudi bol,

He was shocked, and his face was all pale , his facial expression said it all to the person standing infront of him,

Geet was standing with the worry all over written on her face, she rushed towards him.

What happened…

Yudi…

Precape: Marriage and Real Identity of Geet…

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My Lover My Enemy



Part- 08 

Hmm im ready, she said without even delaying a fraction of second, as if she not replied, she would definitely lose the Job,

Okhhh so can we leave,

Hmm Geet just said and started helping to Rano.

They entered inside the khurana mansion, all the way from hospital to KM yudi informed her about the character of Dadi, and How she made the other care taker’s run from KM, Geet was a bit worried but when she saw the angelic face of her mother she smiled, she calmed down, she was still amazed with her own behavior, how within a night she started caring, she started thinking for her mother, or it was from eternity she realized it today only…

They entered into the house, the person was sitting on the sofa, with his head was resting in his hand, and he was in a deep thought that the slumber was evident in his eyes.

He saw three of them entering in his house…

And it reminded him of hers…

That was the same way she entered in his house…

She was same , same like before…

Ahhh come on maan you are still hallucinating her…

That bitch…

She destroyed your life and you are the one moron who still imagining her again and again…

Why can’t you forget her for once…

He came out of his thoughts when yudi tapped his shoulder with smiled on his face.. Which was showing that he actually did it…

He saw him questioningly and he sighed dadi ke liye care taker ka bandobast ho gaya …

She is Geet, she will help you out in taking care of hers…

Maan smiled weakely… and asked him to come along…

Geet you can sit here, aunty ji please have a seat…

He left as soon as he saw both were seated comfortably there…

What the hell they both are doing here..

God yudi grow up man…How can you be so stupid and may say so- called- innocent idiot…

Someone random girl said Bhai to you and you started your Bhaaigiri for her

Huhhh maan was hell frustrated with all this actually to believe on someone stranger and trust them was become really difficult for maan after that dreadful incident in his life… he might be killed himself for that mistake but he was still living, still living for his dadi…

How could he leave her with someone strange person that too he didn’t want to trust…

Yes the innocence in her eyes making me afraid of her…

She was also innocent like her… 

She also pretended nave like her…

She was also simply looked like her…

How could I trust her…

Maan came out of his deep unslumbering thoughts…

Yudi was standing in front of him observing him…

He came ahead and rested his hand on his shoulder

Bro relax…

Whatever happened with you that was I know It shouldn’t, but it doesn’t means you would never ever trust on strangers… you know that was preset for you… she trapped you… But it wasn’t geet’s fault…

Did it… No naa,,,, even she don’t know you very welll…

You know what my heart wanted to trust her… Wouldn’t you at least trust once on my trust…

He was looking deeply in his eyes, as if wanted answer from his soul… and well he knew that maan would agree for this…

Yudi sighed in relief when he saw maan smiled as if for him it was affirmative answer…

It was first day In KM of Geet…

Yester night Yudi made her understand all her job… that was quite easy for her she just have to make dadi eat her lunch, Dinner, and breakfast properly, medication on time and all stuff related to her should be taken good care by geet…

She woke up early morning freshen up and went to lady’s room yesternight she was sleeping when Yudi gone with her to meet up…

She saw her, she might be really beautiful when she was young, she thought and checked around the area, she was sleeping peacefully, but her sleep got disturbed when she saw geet standing infront of her mirror and checking something, Dadi really got alerted and started shouting

Chor Chor…

Maan Chor… kamre me chor… Bachaiye help please…

Geet was flabbergasted; she was not at all expecting this…

She was here to take care of this lady and here she is saying her thief…

Gosh she was standing in the corner while dadi was shouting on top of her voice…

Geet literally shocked and statue in fear, she never saw a woman like this, shouting loudly, that’s when Maan entered with horrified expression,

He was really worried for Dadi he actually ran inside without wasting a time and he was having Vase in his hands as a security measures, Geet stopped breathing in anticipation of upcoming events, she was imagining herself lying on the floor and blood oozing out of her head,

She screamed in Horror, No…

Noo… I am not thief, I am Geet, Believe me M not lying M geet…

Dadi stopped as soon as she saw maan entering inside the room, and rested her hand on ears, maan Grabbed geet and closed her mouth from his hand. But he was hell shocked when she bite his hand, maan left her instantly and galred her, she pouted her lips and looked away, all the while Dadi checking out geet carefully.

Maan sighed and sat on the bed near Dadi, What happened. Dadi,

Dadi was making all type of innocent faces, Beta pata nahi yeh kaha se aaa gayi, mere drawer me pata nahi kyaa dhoondh rahi thi, mujhe dekha toh yeh badi badi aankhen kar ke ghhorni lighi, dadi said in most scared tone ever possible, she understood that she is her new care taker and she just hated the fact that now she has to live her life to be dependent on care taker, she never left any stone to make them run off from the home, sometimes she make them offer a big amount which maan was paying to them for her taking care, she never wanted any one to order her what to do and what not to, she was princess, she is queen and she never obeyed anyone except her father and husband so how could she obey any random person,

Maan brushed her hair as if calming her and then replied, Dadi she is Geet your new car taker, he said gritting her teeth,

Maan made her understand that its important for her health to be with someone around her always,

A month has been passed it was an evening time, though it was really getting difficult for geet day by day to take care of dadi, she used to throw tantrums on her, never understand anything at once, a bit stubborn, according to geet totally like a maan, khadoos, dusht, she cursed him under the breath as usual,

She was working in the kitchen, Mr. khurana maan’s father was really impressed with Maan’s choice this time, he could see how the girl is working  really well, he also gave her so many responsibilities like to check on all servent and take care of all the house, infact she was the only one who was allowed to enter in his room anytime, while other servants were not even dared to look around his room, Maan’s behavior was all same with her, she sometime got confused with his behavior, he some time stared at her  like trying to search some similarities in her, sometimes looked at her like living any memory with someone, and then just got angry and shout on her without any reason, These dadi and pota all set to make my life hell huhhh,

She gain came out of her thought as she saw the soup was all ready, she read in yesterday’s magazine that spinach soup with mushroom is really healthy and beneficial for cardiac patients (I really don’t know about it haa as Im a financial student its just my imaginationWink )

She set the bowl and move towards dadi’s room, arghh now to make her eat this is also a big job, but least she know there is one more volcano waiting inside the room for her,

As she eneterd in the room she saw maan was standing there in mid with all red angry eyes, and dadi with sad face on the bed, she came inside gulping hard,

Ohhh Godd what I did now,

He came ahead, he was holding some box in his hand, she was standing with tray of soup in her hand when maan thrown box on her in anger,

this is the way you are taking care of my dadi, he roared, she shivered in fear and the tray slipped down from her hands, and mingled with those sweets which were also lying worthlessly, the burning sensation wrapped her legs as the hot soup flowed towards her, but the fire which was placed in her heart was very much bigger and stronger than this, the tear escaped from her eyes,

Buss woman soul started using her only weapon, Tears, tears, tears, maan said sarcastically, geet immediately wiped her tears, Yes indeed she was weak, but why the hell to show it to the emotionless people like him.

Mr khurana what is this,

You are asking me, she is your responsibility he pointed towards dadi, she is diabetic you know na geet, these sweets, these are not less than a venom for her, and what I am seeing here, what the hell these sweets were doing here, why the hell u didn’t checked damn room, these sweets are venom for her if u are enough educated then may be u know it, his tone was as piercing as his gaze.

Mr khurana I really don’t have any idea, how it comes  here,

Don’t u dare to lie geet, it was in the drawer what the hell you do damn whole day in house, even when u cant kept an eye on her, she is your responsibility, and I wont spare you till death if anything happened to her,

Dadi was more than happy this time, it all her evil plan, yes indeed it was her plan only to put the sweets in the drawer and asked maan to pass the tablet from the same drawer, she was now irritated with geet, yes she was stubborn, but geet was much more than her, she do nothing but quirlled around her whole day, she was always wanted to do all the things which she wanted, she used to make her reading news paper thrice a day, and then all magazines, then clean all the room, so that she wont get time to come near her, but geet was also one of her name, she managed her time with that also and never failed to give the med. On time, it was irritating Dadi to the core.

Maan grabbed her from her arms and dragged out side the room when Dadi smirked and left the bed and move towards the window.

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They both were walking in their own thought and suddenly a car hit Rano and she hit the floor, and fainted blood oozing out from her forehead and geet was standing there horrified


Ohhh hell Damn it yaar, what you done Yudi, huhhh couldn’t  you just drive carefully, You are the most irresponsible person, I have ever saw in my life,    look that woman is lying on the road. Maan snarl in frustration…….

Damn It Man can’t u just drive carefully…

Oyee Why are you scolding me …U Didn’t want to come....All the time you were making faces, cribbing like a girl… Idiot ne pehley hi manhoosiyat phela rakhi thi …

Damn yudi its not a time for fight… She is lying unconscious there…

And Geet was too numb to express the feeling, she was all the while looking Rano with blank expression whose face was drenched with her own forehead blood and eyes were closed…

A sudden fear of losing someone very precious to her born inside her heart… she wanted to shout… scream… so hard that the angel directly from sky come down to help her…To save her mother…

For the very first time in her life she felt the mother touch… the mother care… she sensed that no matter what will be the circumstances her mother would never leave her…

But the joy… the happiness… the satisfaction was very short lived that she lost it again… she was on the verge of collapse.

They came out from the Car…

And saw the girl standing there…

Her reaction was enough to melt the mild heart of Yudhishtir …

He was literally feeling pain in his heart for the state of such an innocent gal…

Maan was far too away from emotions…

Hey listen I think we need to rush to hospital…Her wound is bleeding heavily…

Geet was standing there lifelessly…

Her fear… her internal turmoil… her havoc inside her mind…

Her guilt to separate her mother from her loved once… was eating her alive…

Goshhh why life couldn’t be easy for her…

Why she couldn’t live a life of simple girl…

Whyyy…

Whyyy…

Why…

Maan grabbed her hand…

Yudi get inside the car with the lady…We need to go to hospital right now…

Yudhisthir nodded silently and get in…

They reached hospital…

How is she???

Maan and yudi both rushed towards the doctor as soon as they saw him coming out of the operating area.

She is alright Mr. Khurana because of stress and sudden hit she left her consciousness that’s it, nothing to worry

And head, head injury what about that doctor…

Yudi asked with very concern voice…

Yup it is external nothing to worry Mr. Shishodiya at all she is all fine.

Doctor said in assuring way…

Maan and Yudi looked at each other and sighed in relief.

Suno , yudi came forward and said to geet who was sitting silently and crying bitterly , as if her whole world was on a stake and she couldn’t do anything except crying crying and crying. As if the tears became an incredible part of her life. As if the hatred of her past left family is changed her place and came into her fate. Well when hatred and betrayal left her fortune, they were always stuck with her, like life stuck with breath, and like breath stuck with oxygen.

Listen she is alright…

Yudi rested his hand on her shoulder… and finally said calming her a bit…

She is alright…

Yes she is alright

Ahhh myyy Mom is alright…

That was the only thing she wanted to hear on this earth… that was the first and last thing for what she was praying since that dreadful moment..

The fear of losing someone, the dread of not able to see the one to whom you just got and willing to live with them, it was just hell suffocating and that fear was not letting her breath normally.

She turned and hugged yudi…

Oh she couldn’t explain how much she was happy…

She failed to realized that the person she was hugging was no one but a mere stranger, yudi first was shocked but then realized it was hug of happiness, it was hug of closeness, it was hug of expression of mother care, it was just a simple hug…

Maan was standing quietly and watching all the scene, he smirk, Bloody melo dramatic middle class peoples, he thought and looked away in disgust.

Hey please… relax, calm down dear, your mom is alright,

I was so scared Bhaai, I thought I lost her, I thought I won’t be able to see her again, for the very first time she was beside me , she stand for me, and I lost her so early, I was so scared.

Bhaiii…

That word hit yudi very hard, as if it direct reached to his heart he was feeling contented with that word, he put his hand on her head and trying to sooth her pain, at that time nothing matter to him, the only thing which was bothering him that her small sister was in pain, she was suffering from the fear, from the trepidation he wanted to sooth her pain, he wanted to calm her down and he was succeeded, he finally succeeded, some time two simple word, a small gesture is enough to calm us, as if after their confirmation nothing matter, nobody matter.

It was sudden unsaid and unfelt bond between Yudhistir and Geet,

Geet was all alone daughter so that Yudi an Iklota waaris of his family, the craving , the longing for the sister was always there in his heart and that emptiness was suddenly filled by Geet.

Maan left the hospital in the late night whereas Yudi was there all the while Beside Geet and her mother; he was feeling guilty because of their suffering,

It was time for their discharge when he heard Geet talking with her mother in a very secret tone.

Maa ab hum kaha jaayenghe? Humaarey paas koi ghar bhi toh nahi…

Maa kya hum papa ke paas chaley, who toh itne bade , itne rich…

Her word caught in her throat as soon as she saw the painful teary eyes of her mother,

No she couldn’t give her more pain, because of her she left her family, the fear, the anticipation of losing someone was really painful that it felt like somebody stabbing inside the heart mercilessly. No now hurting her mother was last thing she would do in her life. She left all the love ones for her; all her relations behind in her life for her these were the only thing she was feeling right away…

Arey maa kyaa ho gaya hum kahi aur chaley jaayeghe kyaa hogaya joh saarey darwaazey band hoghaye koi na koi khidki toh abhi bhi khuli hoghi joh humaari zindaghi me suraj ki kirno ko aaney ka raasta denghi, Maa u don’t worry we will start our life from the beginning I will work hard Very hard, we will get all what we lost, she was giving strength to her ownself, trying to reduced the pain of her mother and the havoc which was storming inside her.

Her mother was looking her in awe, was she the same Geet, who only know how to annoyed others, was she the same Geet, who only know how to irritate  others, was she the same Geet, who only know how to depressed others, no, she was not same, she was the girl who craved for each and every thing in her life, and she is the new one geet who know how to face the problems with the love of their close ones, Or she really became mature within a night, or it was the effect of her mother’s togetherness.

She smiled and pulled her near her and hugged her dearly, as if she is the only best and precious thing which she possessed in this cruel world, Geet came ahead and willingly hugged her, she rested her head on her lap and cried silently,

Maa you know what you are the bestest mom anyone could ever have,

And my guddi do u know you are the precious and priceless diamond anyone could ever have and I am the blissful lady who got this diamond… and kissed her hair and a tear of happiness escaped from her eyes and lost in her hairs…

Yudi was standing outside the room, listening all their conversation, he was smiling but soon he realized a wetness on his cheek ohh He was crying … he chuckled and wiped the tears and went inside the room.

Ohh hoo kyaa chal raha hai hmmm…

Koi mujhey nahi batayegha, he made baby face and Geet chuckled on his childish behavior,

Bhaai nothing we were just planning about our future,

Yudi went ahead, Bhaai bhi bolti hu aur apney future ke liye apne bhaai ke hotey huein pareshaan bhi hoti hai, this is not fair, he complained in a closely manner.

Nahi bhaai…

Bus nahi wahi, kyu, kab, kaise , kyaa yeh sab bhool jaao aur aap dono abhi mere saath chalrahe ho mere ghar,

Nahi…

Nahii bhaai, aap ne behan kaha hai kyaa aap chahtey hai ki meri self respect par aanch aaye, kyaa aap chatey hai humaari khuddari par hurf aaye nahi na,

Raano maasi aap please iss pagal ko samjhaye aap logho ko mere saath hi chalna hogha bas aur kucch nahi...Dekhiye aap ko me ne maasi mana hai matlab maasi , ab aap batayiye kyaa mujhe accha laghegha ke meri maa jesi maasi yaha waha bhatekein jab ke beta un ka ab tak hai…

Beta , Geet bilkul sahi keh rahi hai, hum ne dekha hai bojh ban jaaney par toh khoon ke rishtey bhi zahar ki nigaah dekhtey hai aur tum toh…

She closed her mouth and whimpered silently and a tear escaped from geet’s eyes too but she stopped her self immediately, no she couldn’t be weak at this point, it is really high time in my life, yaa toh abhi yaa phir kabhi nahi…geet thought and wiped off her tear,

Thik hai Yudi bhaai agar aap kucch karna hi chahtey hai toh please kyaa aap mere liye ek Job ka bandobast kar saktey hai please…

That was the same time, Yudi’s phone rang, he saw the number and immediately excused himself, He went outside the room,

Rano saw her daughter, she knew her daughter but even after having a job that too permanent why she was asking for new Job, that quite weird, but sopped herself to ask her she knew her daughter very well, she was always unpredictable.

Geet saw the question in her eyes, and rested her head again on her lap,

Maa jab jo pichhey tha who sab kucch chhod diya, rishtey naatey tod diye toh phir yeh Job kyaa matlab rakhti hai,

Me nahi chahti uss parivar ka koi bhi shaks humaari life me, humaarey future me kaaley saaye ki tarah aaye, na me bardaasht kar paaoonghi aur na hi me aap ko wapas ussi dard se guzarta dekhna chahoonghi.

Yudi came out…

Oh it was Maan on another line…

Hey buddy hows you…

Not good at all

Why what happened again..

Dadi yaar…

Ohh so no 51th  also left

That too without notice, maan said in a bit grouchy tone…

Toh fir?????

Buddy please, Maan almost pleaded,

No… Helll No way, u know naa last time what she did when she learned that I send that care taker, Yaar meri Anjali toh shaadi se pehle hi Widhwa ho jaayeghi,

Arghhh Bad joke early morning I hate it you know na.... maan said in cranky voice.

Gosh you and  your Dadi both are living to make my life hell…

Rukk kuchh karta hu, Lekin Bata raha hu it should be last time I am helping you in this matter…

Okhh Buddy u know you are the most caring and responsible person I have ever saw in my life,

Ohh please keep your dustbin shut, yester night only you were shouting on me that I am irresponsible person you had ever seen,

Maan smile a bit, Gosh he never forgot when I shouted on him, and when I said something about him,

Okk theek hai na …Is there any point to discuss it right away…

Yeah Yeah Mr. Khurana jis me aaap ka benefit ho wohi baat honi chahiye hai na, he said in totally womanly tone…

You know what yudi, you some time totally behave like Anjali…

Saath rehney se itna similarity aa jata hai kyaa…

Hahah was that joke…

Okhh so prince yudhishtir you are coming at my place with care taker sharp at 2.00 pm I am waiting at my place itself,

Hmmm, he said and cut the call…

He made his way inside the room,

Geet listen, If u don’t mind, I have a job for you,

A smiled which was crept on  geets face as a reaction of news made Yudhistir satisfied a bit,

Actually it my friend, Maan’s Dadi, she is diabetic and also heart patient, with a problem of blood pressure you know aged she is… hmmm

Geet was looking him with all concern,

And we want care taker for her,

Hmm im ready, she said without even delaying a fraction of second, as if she not replied, she would definitely lose the Job,

Okhhh so can we leave,

Hmm Geet just said and started helping to Rano.

They entered inside the khurana mansion, all the way from hospital to KM yudi informed her about the character of Dadi, and How she made the other care taker’s run from KM, Geet was a bit worried but when she saw the angelic face of her mother she smiled, she calmed down, she was still amazed with her own behavior, how within a night she started caring, she started thinking for her mother, or it was from eternity she realized it today only…

They entered into the house, the person was sitting on the sofa, with his head was resting in his hand, and he was in a deep thought that the slumber was evident in his eyes.

precape: what the hell yudi, why the hell they both are here? Angry Angry Angry

and dadi ready to make geet’s life hell… Ouch Ouch Ouch

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My Lover My Enemy
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He came out of his thoughts when the shore came on him like a witch who is ready to pounce on him any moment he looked at the place where the girl was sitting, now no one was there, the place was empty like his heart.

With that he came out of his trance. He just wanted to delete those miserable moments from his life but he Failed, The Maan singh khurana failed in making his life the Ideal life of prince Maan singh khurana, The life which he deserved long time ago, but now’.

He deserve only Punishment, the cage of guilt,

Jaise uss ka dard aur uss ka wajood aur kucch baaki hi na ho, jism nahi dard ka maqbara ho jaha teesen utthti aur wohi dum tod jaati, bilkul wasie hi jaise samundar me lehrey uththi hai aur kinaarey par dum tod deti hai

(The pain and his painful body, and nothing more than that, the body was not more belong to maan singh khurana , It belongs to a grave, where pain, petty and hatred.

As Geet saw the person sitting behind her she become alert, and just left the place without a single word.

Suddenly she check the cell , Rahul messaged her to come to his Hospital.

He was intern in the Sanjeeevani hospital. She went there as every one in the hospital know her as a Best Frnd of Dr.  Rahul. She was very famous in the Children’s ward. She went there and spends some time there too. Her uncle and Rahul’s Father is one the biggest donor of the hospital so she allowed to come here any time freely and can move there freely any where in the hospital. She was waiting in the intern’s room for rahul. As rahul entered he looked at her sadly and smiled. Her eyed was swelled because of crying and tension. She went near him and hugged her tightly, no matter how much she hates his family but as a best friend she loves him a lot. In every mess situation he is always behind her to support her, to just pat her shoulder and say don’t worry yaar I am with you.

And geet being never a materialistic girl was happy in that.

Rahul can sense that she is crying, she pat her and make her sit on one of the bench, she was sobbing badly. He put his hand on her hand and geet close her eyes in acceptance.

She made her sit on the desk, and geet was crying bitterly, he makes her understand the situation and calm her a bit.

There was Flash light flashed in the room, Rahul became alert he saw here, and there nobody was there he, though it may be his illusion, they talk for a whole two hours, finally geet was feeling relax, Rahul made her understand the situation of the Family, there Point of view towards geet, Geet was calmed now a lot, Rahul drove towards the House, He stopped the Car, near the portico and asked her to get down, and informed his parents that he will come late. Geet came out of the car.

Her mamaji saw the whole scene from the terrace, He  saw geet came out of the car, then stand near the Car window for some times and talk with the person who was sitting inside, he was unable to see the person inside.

He was waiting for geet desperately, he received some envelope few times before and he wants to clarify, all the fidget today itself, he don’t wants to delay this matter anymore .

Now his doubt turn into believe, that the envelope which he received today is true. Then he thought that she may be come with this person to meet with them, but he saw that car started and she was waving bye to him and the person drove again outside the door, his blood boiled instantly.

He came down, geet was entering the home, he looked at her and throw some pictures from the envelope.

First geet was shocked to see him so angry, then she looked at the pictures which he threw on her, her face was first shocked to react than her face grew pale with the thought which may be her uncle thinking about her.

Those were some pictures of her with Rahul, when she was with her today in his hospital, he was holding her, she was crying at that time, but the person’s only back was there and her full face, it showing like she may be with some one doing something wrong with that person, which is against her culture, against her values.

Then she looked around every one was standing there with same expression of shock, her mom, today she can see some different kind of expressions, which she was unable to understand. Her uncle come ahead and said

What is this Geet? Yeh kya hai? Kon hai yeh ladka aur kiss ke saath tum abhi aayi ho bataao? Bataao mujhe?

She looked at her mom, there was only one expression written over there i.e. Disbelieve? Don’t know why but geet liked it.

She was looking down and her uncle come ahead and his hand went up to slap her, but it stopped by her Mom in the middle of the air.

Geet looked up: her mom standing with her,

Bus kijiye bhai sahib, aap ko sharam nahi aayi apni beti jaisi bhaanji par aisa ilzaam laghate hue, Even I am feeling disgusted to call you as my brother, how cheap your mentality is. I know my daughter very well; I know which type of girl she is. She can disrespect you, she can hate you, she can shout on you, she can disobey you, she can take you for granted, but she will never make fun of your name in front of the society, she can never, she cant at all””””””’.

That was it, she hugged her Geet, hug her baby, took her into her embrace try to hide her from all the sorrows, from the piercing gaze of all those filthy peoples.

Beta lets go, we wont live here anymore, she sad it finally, finally the single sentence for which Geet was longing from so long, trying her level best to make her mom understand and when she realized that she would never be able to make her understand, she understood, Her mother understood her longings, her sorrows, her heart felt some piece its like first call of the morning for her.

They both made their way outside the house, Rahul was nowhere, and nobody wanted to stop them, why should they will stop them at first place, its like a burden of their head reduced.

They both walking on the footpath, they had no idea about their future, where they will stay, whom to call and ask for help, Geet was totally numb, she lost her senses long times before, before leaving that house, the last thing which was in her mind was that, her Mom is with her, and now life will never be like before and that was enough to make her numb, the small kid in her heart which always longed for her mother now was in a peace.

They both were walking in their own thought and suddenly a car hit Rano and she hit the floor, and fainted blood oozing out from her forehead and geet was standing there horrified

Precape: Geet at Maan’s Place

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It was late night maan was tensed for Dadi, He knew that without him Dadi will nevertake her Dinner, It was their Daily routine, Maan and Dadi sit together for the Dinner and share their whole days experience with each other.

Maan used to listen only , he used to sit there mute only listening Dadi, because Dadi was alone all the day no one was their for her to talk. And Being a maharani she never allows anyone to come near her. So Maan was the only sharer of dadi.

As Maan reached home he saw Dadi sitting in the main hall worriedly, he sighed and he knew what will be the next coming qstn. Dadi just opened her mouth to say something

Maan Instanly cut her words: 

Dadi I was with Yudi, Rani ke baba was hospitalized so we were with her.

Dadi looked at him and said: Beta koi ghabraane waali baat toh hai nahi na, you want me to talk Sishodiyas regarding this.

Maan put his hand on Dadi’s shoulder and said “No dadi its their family matter, and I know they won’t like it  if we interfere in that. Waise mujhe aap yeh bataaey aap ne Before Dinner Med liye ke nahi.

And with the Gesture of Innocent Dadi he understood : Nakul Dadi ki medicines laao abhi , he said sternly,

Dadi: Vinod maan ke room me freshen up, towel check karo abhi.

Both looked at each other and smirk.

Till nakul came back Maan was sitting with Dadi, he take the medicines from nakul and feed to Dadi.and then said Dadi will meet you in the Dining area in the 5 minutes. Dadi Smiled.

It was his Daily routine, Before going to his room he use to give the before dinner medicens to dadi, then freshen up and come back to have a dinner with Dadi then long walk and again Dadi’s medicine session and off course last Goodnight kiss. For Dadi good night kiss was more effective than any other medicines.

                                                                                                                                    

Continuous ringing of phone disturbed his sleep. He looked at phone with sleepy eyes and then picked it up as he saw the caller id a smiled crap on his face

Ha bol ”’..

Good morning naam ke manners kyaa aap ki Dictionary me nahi hai. Raajkumar Maan singh Khurana?

Who toh duniya waalo ke liye hai aap ke liye toh hum aise hi thik hai Kunwar yudhishtir ji

And both laughed on their own joke. (loll was that joke at first place)

Maan me aaj office nahi aa raha kuchh personal kaam hai tujhe aa kar batata hu okhh

Sab thik toh hai na Yudi

Haa yaar, bus aaj office me kuch work pressure bhi nahi hai and na hi koi client meeting yah kucch aur hai so was want to bunk the office. Waise jab college me they toh tu ne college bunk karne nahi diya ab office bunk kar kar ke hi Dil ke armaan pure karne pad rahe ahi,.

Maan rolled eyes on his Funny Emotion atyachar,

Ohh stop it Yudi Don’t start again hows Baba, is he alright.

Yes maan he is Fine and will get discharge in some time.

Okhh thik hai but I am coming to meet him before going to office be there only till then okhh.

Okk dude. Chal bye.

Hmmm maan said and cut the call.

He Get ready gave the medicine to the Dadi and started driving towards hospital.

He was near reception area and busy on a call and he bumped with any girl.

He looked up and froze for the second then his expression change infraction of second from shock to disgust. He just turn around and start moving towards exit.

Maan please, please maan meri baat toh suniye,I am sorry maan , please , I know what I did that was wrong but I want one chance please maan only one chance that’s what  I am asking , begging please maan. 

But maan was nowhere to listen, he was long gone lost in his own world.

He start the car and Drive madly towards the unknown direction. He was burning inside with fear, hatred, and the feeling of being insulted.

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Geet woke up in the morning she knows no one is going to ask her for Breakfast or any thing she just made Breakfast for two.had her own and leave the another one for mom.

She knows if she won’t make it her mom will never take anything as a breakfast. She put it all the stuff on the Dining table and leaves the home for the school; it was Saturday so school was for 2 HRS. and she  know Nupur won’t come today as its optional day for teachers those who wants to do extra time can come on Saturdays and others if they want to earn extra or any other reason like there absenteeism they came on Saturdays. But Geet she is always been an exceptional case, she every Saturday came to school and work for 4 extra hrs. rather than 2 hrs.

She did her work and starts moving towards her next destination. It’s her weekly routine every weekend she went to the juhu chowpaty of Mumbai. She never knows why but the Sea always attracts her from early childhood days. When Nupur and she was in the college every day after college they used to came there, she just loved to walk on the sand with bare foot. The shore of a sea always tried to say something to her, but she always fails to understand that what secret they want to share.  The mystery airs of the sea whenever it touch her hair she felt like its her Dad who is blessing her and his hands are always on her head.

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Maan stops his car on the Chowpaty this was same place where he realized pyaar is nothing but the trick, a prank to play with the emotions.

He went to the sea side

Please listen this song while reading this

 

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Zindaghi ne Zindaghi bhar gham diye

Jitne bhi mosam diye sab nam diye

 geet was standing infront of the sea

(Flash back is in purple) 

maa mujhe aap ki God me sone hai please

Bete pehle in bacho ko sula du phir me tumhe story suna kar sulaaoonghi, the day never came when her mother read story for her, its always for her cousins only

Jab tadapata hai kabhi apna koi

Khoon ke aansu rula de bebasi

Jee ke phir karna kya hamein aisi zindaghi

Jisne zakhmo ko nahi marham diye  

Maan was sitting on the bonnet of the car

Flash back

Inhe Cardiac attack hua hai its minor but I guess just because of some tension , stress or may be some shock. please make sure she be away from any stress

Apne hi pesh aaye hum se ajnabi

Waqt ki saazish koi samjha nahi

Geet tum humaarey ghar me rehti ho sumjhi tum, mere Dad tumhare needs and all ki care karte hai, and if you want princess treatement go to your fathers house. Its my dad’d house and here I am princess.

How can she forget smirk and proud in Natasha’s eyes. But she was also right at her place she is in her fathers home after all.

Beirada kuchh khataayein hum se ho gayi

Raah me patthar meri har dum diye

Tumhein kyaa lagha maan me tum se pyaar karti hu, tum mere standard par kahi nahi aatey tum toh mere maid ke standard ke bhi layak ke nahi ho. Itna Gentlement types banda what do u think that you are BF material not at all. Haaa the maan singh khurana aur itni aasaani se bewakoof ban gaya. hahahaha

These words always behind him like a spy or a big bad luck. No matter wherever he is these words always behind him, uskii rooh ko kachodti, har lamha ek guilt ke ehasas ke saath.

Ek mukammal kashmakash zindaghi

Uss ne hum se ki kabhi na Dosti

Maan yeh tum ne kyaa kiya me ne tumhe apna beta nahi ek dost samjha , apni company ki har information ek newsfeed ki tarah tumhaare saamne rakh di aur tum tum ne mere bte hokar mere busimess rivals ko madad ki. Iss se achha toh hota ke me tumhe apne co,. se dur rakhta lekin ab bhi kucch nahi bigda tum aaj se iss co. me nahi aaonghe kabhi bhi nahi. Na mere jite jii aur na mere marne ke baad, Go and make your place in this world. And don’t think that I will ever help you in this life. Tum ne apni bewakoofi ki wajah se apne baap ko hi nahi ek advisor aur ek humdard ko kho diya hai.

Jab mili mujh ko aansu ke who tohfe de gayi

Has sake humaise moke kum diye

Mom I topped in the college as she enters the house screamed but her happiness increase as she saw there was already party arranged she thought its for her, but her happiness vanished as she realized it was not for her its for Natasha, her cousin who just passed in the board.

END OF FLASH BACK 

Geet was sitting on the sand staring at sun set. She knows that every night have its morning but which type of life she have where there is no lighting, happiness and she is always like a sea and beach, who know each other, milte hai aur kucch der me hi bichhad jaatey hai.

She was sitting there and said “Zindagi humesha dard q deti hai,

Shayad ussey hume aazmaaney me maza aata hai.

A replied came from behind but she was so lost in her own land.

Lekin hum hi q???

Shayad iss liye ke kismet bhi jaanti hai ke hum hi uss ke muqabla kar sakte hai.

Maan replied he was just came to see the sunset and he heard the question, the same question which he asked 2 years before at same place in same gesture, he wont get reply, but today he wants to reply this gril, jaise najaane q magar uska dard apne jaise hi lagha,

He sat next to her; her hair was covering her face due to cool breeze.

Aur agar hum ussey bardaasht nahi kar sakey toh .

 Nahi dard uss ko utna hi milta hai jitna insaan bardasht kar sakta hai.

Be izzati toh phir bhi bardaasht ho jaati hai magar, apno se judaai bardaasht kaise karey?

That was it maan closed his eyes and he saw his father, standing infront of him with an agony, the hearted. He opened his eyes , he cant bear that pain, it squeezing his heart, Two whole years and he not talked with his father, 2 years and he is living his life like a hell.  

He remember every thing like it was just yesterday only, how he became apart of the dirty game. Without his knowledge people use him and then left her like he is nothing, the day when he was sitting here only crying her heart out, that day not only sun drowned in the water , that day maan also died, the maan who love to be jolly, funky, who maan jiske bina parties adhuri laghti, the maan who was most famous in the girls for his gentleman behavior. That day maan died he judged and decide the punishment for him self, the punishment for love someone madly, punishment to believe the people so easily.

He came out of his thoughts when the shore came on him like a witch who is ready to pouce on him any moment he looked at the place where the girl was sitting, now no one was there, the place was empty like his heart. 

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